Jo Walton ([info]papersky) wrote,
@ 2009-06-30 07:44:00
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Sonnet (Even Keats made this thought seem a little whiny)
If I should die some night and never see
Dawn's light, my email, and my morning tea,
I face the thought with equanimity,
In fact, it would be worse for you than me.
Not that I want to die and turn to clay.
I'm only half-way through, I want to stay,
I want more years, more books, more chance to say
I love my life, my work, my friends, my day.
But I would know for sure the mystery
Perhaps go on to live again and grow
But even if there's nothing, I would know.
My death I view with calm philosophy
It's other people's death that makes me rage
Weep, grieve, and curse, demand another page.


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[info]bellinghman
2009-06-30 12:21 pm UTC (link)
Thank you.

(Though you may have to beat literalist pedants away from line 11. Literalist pedants are dangerous near poems anyway.)

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[info]mrissa
2009-06-30 12:50 pm UTC (link)
Yah.

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[info]snippy
2009-06-30 01:15 pm UTC (link)
This is wonderful. Thanks for sharing it.

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[info]wolfinthewood
2009-06-30 01:23 pm UTC (link)
Thank you for this.

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[info]6_penny
2009-06-30 01:29 pm UTC (link)
A laurel wreath is awarded.

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[info]aedifica
2009-06-30 02:32 pm UTC (link)
Yes.

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[info]kalmn
2009-06-30 02:56 pm UTC (link)
next time i see my friend who committed suicide earlier in the month, may i beat him about the head and shoulders with this?

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[info]papersky
2009-06-30 03:11 pm UTC (link)
How I wish you could!

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[info]kalmn
2009-06-30 03:12 pm UTC (link)
i'm gonna go lacquer it onto a two by four, then, so i'm ready.

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thank you
[info]kitgordon
2009-06-30 03:55 pm UTC (link)
for the lovely sonnet, a form I enjoy reading (and, occasionally, writing). Both form and content make this one special. It was a pleasure meeting you at 4th Street.

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[info]chinders
2009-06-30 07:53 pm UTC (link)
Very lovely. (I particularly loved seeing the word 'e-mail' in a sonnet.) But seriously...this resonates really strongly with me. Thank you.

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[info]fledgist
2009-06-30 09:37 pm UTC (link)
Truly lovely, Jo. I'm envious.

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[info]alitalf
2009-06-30 10:32 pm UTC (link)
Yes. Completely true, and written better than I ever could.

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[info]ndrosen
2009-07-01 04:03 am UTC (link)
You're not just a notable fantasy/alternate history novelist; you're a poet of real distinction. This and some of your other work is much, much better than most of what gets published as Serious Poetry.

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[info]papersky
2009-07-01 12:29 pm UTC (link)
Thank you. I appreciate it, especially as I'm finding it so hard to get anywhere with the one you commissioned.

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[info]ndrosen
2009-07-04 04:17 am UTC (link)
I can imagine the difficulty; if it were easy to write great verse about a dead economist and his ideas, I'd have done it myself. You can try consulting with me, if you think that would help, or reading some of Henry George's speeches, which can be very moving, and easier to follow than The Science of Political Economy. They might help you understand why I thought the topic worth commissioning poetry about, besides wanting to help Peter and Ericka, to be sure.

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[info]wellinghall
2009-07-01 09:38 am UTC (link)
I like that; thank you.

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[info]ashnistrike
2009-07-07 12:07 am UTC (link)
Thank you. This topic came up at a WisCon pannel, and this is exactly what I didn't have quite the words to communicate.

-Nameseeker

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