Jo Walton ([info]papersky) wrote,
@ 2006-08-29 12:15:00
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Three Bears Norse. (It was supposed to be an example, sheesh.)
An old home, a bear home, remote from human-haunts,
Wall-girt and weather-warded, where ones wise in woodcraft
Lick into new life, a baby, a bear cub,
Safe among saplings, far in the forest.

Till one comes slyly, girlchild, goldilocks,
Soft-handed, secret-seeker, pamperling, pretty one,
"No!" never heard she, dancing like dandelion,
Stealing twixt tree-boughs, spies out the bear-house.

Fast closed stands the door, all bears gone from home,
In rushes Dandelion, door-breaker, greedy one,
No thought spares she for holy guest-law,
Spoiled child, undenied, heart set on plunder.

First seizes three chairs, orderly, big to small,
Claims each and tries each, breaking the smallest.
Next finds the oat-slop, orderly, big to small,
Claims each and tries each, eating the smallest.

Onwards goes Dandelion, breaker of guest-law,
Turning from oat-slop, yawning, bedwards,
Slinks up the stairs, three beds, big to small,
Orderly, tries each, sleeps on the smallest.

Bears, heading homewards, sleepy as sun seeks sea,
Father foremost, bear-cub beside him, bear mother guarding rear,
Stop still, scent surprise, coming on cautiously
See their door open stands, blowing on wild winds.

"Who?" asks bear-father, "Dared to sit in my chair?"
"Who?" growls bear-mother, "Dared to sit in my chair?"
"Who," howls bear cub "Dared to sit in my chair,
Breaking it to scattered shards? I vow revenge."

"Who?" asks bear-father, "Dared to taste my oat-slop?"
"Who?" growls bear-mother, "Dared to taste my oat slop?"
"Who," howls bear cub "Dared to eat my oat-slop,
Eating it all up? I vow revenge!"

Upstairs, at long last, learn of the lawbreaker,
Sleeping serenely, stuffed with their oat-slop,
Wakes for an instant, seeing them, simpers, screams,
Bear teeth, bear claws, shred her, sunder her,
so perish law-breakers.


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[info]xiphias
2006-08-29 04:18 pm UTC (link)
Yay! I was so hoping you'd do this. . .

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[info]papersky
2006-08-29 04:28 pm UTC (link)
If you like things Norse that aren't supposed to be, I did the Irish "Tale of Mac Da Tho's Pig" like that as one of the chapter-start quotes for The King's Peace.

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(no subject) - [info]llennhoff, 2006-08-29 05:43 pm UTC (Expand)
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[info]maribou
2006-08-29 04:20 pm UTC (link)
Hurrah! This was great.

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[info]noveldevice
2006-08-29 04:27 pm UTC (link)
*adoration*

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[info]llennhoff
2006-08-29 04:28 pm UTC (link)
Thank you so much - being part of this made my day.

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[info]txanne
2006-08-29 04:32 pm UTC (link)
You are the spiritual heir of John M. Ford himself.

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[info]janni
2006-08-29 04:33 pm UTC (link)
(applauds)

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[info]mrissa
2006-08-29 04:34 pm UTC (link)
Wheeee! Oh, love it, love it.

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[info]jhetley
2006-08-29 04:35 pm UTC (link)
Yay!

(Printed for Wife.)

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[info]wcg
2006-08-29 04:37 pm UTC (link)
That is very, very good!

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[info]green_knight
2006-08-29 04:40 pm UTC (link)
Livejournal readers, greedy, eager for stories...

Brilliant!

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[info]sovay
2006-08-29 04:46 pm UTC (link)
I bow down before your kennings.

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Okay...
[info]seawasp
2006-08-29 04:51 pm UTC (link)
... so when's the movie?

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[info]casacorona
2006-08-29 04:54 pm UTC (link)
love it love it love it.

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[info]tnh
2006-08-29 04:54 pm UTC (link)
Such joy!

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[info]bethzebra
2006-08-29 05:06 pm UTC (link)
I am speechless with delight.

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[info]kip_w
2006-08-29 05:07 pm UTC (link)
Cool! Cleverly crafted, well wittily written
Tale tautly retold, satisfied smile stays.

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[info]jamesovei
2006-08-29 05:08 pm UTC (link)
Coolness.

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[info]matociquala
2006-08-29 05:09 pm UTC (link)
*loff*

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[info]_swallow
2006-08-29 05:19 pm UTC (link)
You are so awesome.

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[info]commodorified
2006-08-29 05:19 pm UTC (link)
That is wonderful!

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[info]desperance
2006-08-29 05:24 pm UTC (link)
*happy dance*

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[info]cynthia1960
2006-08-29 05:35 pm UTC (link)
Brava!

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[info]kalquessa
2006-08-29 05:45 pm UTC (link)
That is awesome. The meter kept reminding me of Tolkien, not surprising if you were emulating Nordic verse.

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[info]elissaann
2006-08-29 06:14 pm UTC (link)
May I set this to music? It would be marvelous sung with small harp!

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[info]papersky
2006-08-29 06:29 pm UTC (link)
You'd be welcome to, but I wouldn't have thought it was singable. But go ahead. I'd love to hear it sometime. Don't sing it to any small children who have only heard the nice version!

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[info]carandol
2006-08-29 06:58 pm UTC (link)
Like it!

I was also impressed with the advanced publicity. First there's the teaser in your previous post. Then I load up my friends page later and find all manner of people telling me to read your latest poem before I even get far enough down the page to see it.

It's Snakes on a Plane all over again...

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[info]papersky
2006-08-29 07:04 pm UTC (link)
It's because everyone is completely mad.

What do people want? Actual poetry, reflections on writing, whining about cutting my finger, wordcount? Nope, Goldilocks retold in pseudo-Old Lore metre with a caesura, that's what they want.

However, the publicity would have been even worse if it had been up to Zorinth, who for someone related to us is really remarkably capitalistic. On hearing that I'd been paid $5 in advance to write it, he suggested I should post the first three verses and demand more for more, rather along the lines of a pledge drive.

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